Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, September 12, 2012
Tuesday, September 11, 2012
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Thursday, August 16, 2012
Thursday, June 21, 2012
Ethan's character description (Guess Who I Am?)
WALT:use imagery.
_______belongs to the Galactic Republic from the cloning factories of Kamino, there they will have difficult training to become the soldier every boy deams of being. In battle the big and strong human fighting machine , muscular and loyal battles for life and death on land and up in the overwhelming space battle.
As the ____ _______ speed up above the cratered battlefield on Geonosis I wait for landing,"I am all good","I got my men and a DC-15a","the bad thing is I might Die" I said.The blast shields close ,heavily breathing,hoping not to die,"get ready"the pilot said .Asthe shields open, we all rushed outside like a bolt of lightning .So it begins.My battle for freedom has begun.
By Ethan
_______belongs to the Galactic Republic from the cloning factories of Kamino, there they will have difficult training to become the soldier every boy deams of being. In battle the big and strong human fighting machine , muscular and loyal battles for life and death on land and up in the overwhelming space battle.
As the ____ _______ speed up above the cratered battlefield on Geonosis I wait for landing,"I am all good","I got my men and a DC-15a","the bad thing is I might Die" I said.The blast shields close ,heavily breathing,hoping not to die,"get ready"the pilot said .Asthe shields open, we all rushed outside like a bolt of lightning .So it begins.My battle for freedom has begun.
By Ethan
Wednesday, June 20, 2012
Guess Who?
WALT: Use imagery
Her hair is golden like the sun, her skin is as blue as the sky in the middle of summer. Everyone knows her name, she's practically famous, well only to her family. She's one of a kind too, literally because all of the rest of her family are boys. Potion mixers, annoying jokers with exploding presents and brainy brothers that don't even understand the word cool, now she must have a boring life. Her most favourite accessory is her white hat and the daisy right next to it sitting on her head. The tiny mushroom house that she lives in is covered with colours. A good personality is what she has, if you're in a bad mood she will turn your frown upside down!
Leah
Her hair is golden like the sun, her skin is as blue as the sky in the middle of summer. Everyone knows her name, she's practically famous, well only to her family. She's one of a kind too, literally because all of the rest of her family are boys. Potion mixers, annoying jokers with exploding presents and brainy brothers that don't even understand the word cool, now she must have a boring life. Her most favourite accessory is her white hat and the daisy right next to it sitting on her head. The tiny mushroom house that she lives in is covered with colours. A good personality is what she has, if you're in a bad mood she will turn your frown upside down!
Leah
Thursday, April 26, 2012
L.I: WALA images of ANZAC - 25 April
They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old;Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn.At the going down of the sun and in the morningWe will remember them.
LEST WE FORGET
LEST WE FORGET
The vocabulary and phrases Room 4 came up with to describe the ANZAC image of the Poppy.
"Blood, darkness, remembrance, faithfulness of the soldiers, New Zealand, peace/rangimarie, new life, lest we forget, peace is worth fighting for, fight for peace; die with honour, enthusiasm that the soldiers didn’t give up, care, families, love and life, togetherness, red for the blood, black for the darkness, green for new life, “Big boys don’t cry but old army soldiers do” (NZ News 25th April, 2012), they gave their lives for us, never shall we forget you, lest we forget, fight for peace, enthusiasm, show faith in what you believe in, the long stick represents the aging of life, and that most people in war didn’t get to grow old like we will, hatred towards each other (fighting against each other when they need to be friends), poppy, fight for peace, crushed beneath the soldiers feet"
"Blood, darkness, remembrance, faithfulness of the soldiers, New Zealand, peace/rangimarie, new life, lest we forget, peace is worth fighting for, fight for peace; die with honour, enthusiasm that the soldiers didn’t give up, care, families, love and life, togetherness, red for the blood, black for the darkness, green for new life, “Big boys don’t cry but old army soldiers do” (NZ News 25th April, 2012), they gave their lives for us, never shall we forget you, lest we forget, fight for peace, enthusiasm, show faith in what you believe in, the long stick represents the aging of life, and that most people in war didn’t get to grow old like we will, hatred towards each other (fighting against each other when they need to be friends), poppy, fight for peace, crushed beneath the soldiers feet"
Wednesday, February 29, 2012
L.I: WALA varied and precise adjectives, verbs and nouns
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