"Have you seen my lucky Shot put?" she asked vigorously with a blank look on her face. Valerie Adams had actually lost her lucky shot put. Scrambling everywhere, her head was in a mess.
Finally the day came for the competition. She didn't know where the shot put was. Belarus stepped up to the platform and threw 21.36m. Unfortunately it wasn't Valerie Adams lucky day when she threw 20.70.
When she spotted the Belarus's shot put flying swiftly through the air, she noticed that it was her lucky shot put. Later in the competition Belarus was caught out. Luckily Valerie had won the Gold!! Then the celebration party a began.
The End
By Takunda
Well done Takunda. It was fantastic to know that Valarie Adams has been awarded the Gold Medal. I like how you have used interesting language to give expression and visual impact to the audience. Ka pai. Mrs Grant
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