Monday, August 20, 2012

The Adventures of Valerie Adams

"It wasn't me" said Arahi, when Valerie asked where her shot put case was. She had only brought one over to the Olympics. She looked everywhere but she couldn't find it. She didn't know what to do!

Valerie asked her team mates if they had seen it but no one had. She went back to the bedroom at the hotel and looked under her bed. Valerie found it behind her other bag. She was happy when she found it.

Valerie went back to the competition and threw as far as she could. She won a Silver Medal.

Later that week she got a phone to tell her that she had won a Gold Medal.

By Arahi McLachlan

4 comments:

  1. Very interesting story. Great descriptive language.

    Takunda

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  2. Arahi, we liked your story about Valerie Adams. We were pleased she won the Gold medal foe shot put.

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  3. Thank you Takunda for leaving a comment. Yes, I agree there was some lovely descriptive language here.
    Mrs Grant

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